When, When, When

by P o e m e l o   Jun 17, 2013



When you look at me,
Everything works accordingly.
Trees sways and birds sing hymns,
What a true joy it could bring.

When you touch me,
You send a sweet caress.
It transcend through my vein;
Erasing all my pain.

When you say 'I love you'
My world seems to freeze,
My heart pounds too great,
For you shared so much bliss.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Tim

    I especially love the opening stanza. It's such a powerful opening... It is easy to sense how magical your love is.

    Keep Penning,

    Tim

    • 6 years ago

      by P o e m e l o

      I just sign in right now after so many years. Thank you very much for your appreciation.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sigoney Holder

    Really lovely.

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