Wow oh wow. This poem blew me away. Where to start. Hmm lets see. I love this poem because it tells a story.. about how some people feel inside. The inner beast that wants to come out..that is a perfect dark metaphor. You put so much passion an love and hurt into this peice. Unbelievable. 5/5.

I sense emotion in this parody of Little Red Riding Hood . I really enjoyed reading this and would not change a thing