A place full of magic (song)

by Tim   Jun 17, 2013


Baby you're the one, the only one,
Worth writing a, song for.
Baby you're the one, the only one,
That I, long for.

Please, let me, grab you-by the hand,
Let me take you to an, unfor-get-able land.
A, place, where, we-can be free,
To laugh and smile and drink tea.

A place full of magic,
Some people would call it drastic.
But I just say, its fan-tastic.
What have you got to loose?
A sordid life - full of booze,
Waking every morning - and, hitting snooze,
I just wanna take away your blues.

Cause,

Baby you're the one, the only one,
worth writing a, song for.
Baby you're the one, the only one,
that I, long for.

Give me your hand, while you've still got the chance,
we don't have long, this is the last dance.
I promise you, you wont regret it,
You def-initly, wont forget it.

We're going to a place, where, we-can be free,
To laugh and smile and drink tea.
A place full of magic,
Some people would call it drastic,
But I just say, its fan-tastic.

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  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    Much much better than your first son I feel. I imagined the lyrics. The imagery is fantastic. This time I could see nothing wrong. The chours is much more free flowing this time. I can imagine this as a pop type song for sure. I wonder what the place of music is. But it leaves me guessing haha but 5/5. .

  • 11 years ago

    by Tim

    This is suppose to be "A place full of magic" - Ooops....

    Is there an edit poem function on here? (anyone?)

    EDIT : Changed it now :)

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Oh my goodness this is sooooo beautiful, she is sure I lucky girl and I relaly hope she appreicates this song, it takes a special man to write a song for the women he loves, bravo!!!! 100/100, I think this is my favorite :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Tim

      Thanks again Catchy! :)

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