Wow, that had a lot of very important things to say, remarkable work, outstanding song, almost jumped u and started to sing it, i really enjoyed reading it, never stop writing, outstanding lines, love them :) |
by Tim
Awww. That's Cathy. - I actually wrote this a while ago. But I wasn't here at the time.... I'm slowly trying to put old writings on here as I find them, and mix them in with current ones. :) |
by Tim
If anyone reads this.... |
by Tim
Doesn't matter. Sorted it now :) |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
Ok no negative things but here is what I like. I love howyou let your voice shine with the flow of words. I loved the verses more than the chours though I guess that is my only nit pick. I guess I have high hopes for choruses though lol. But I found it a bit comical as you changed up the words at the end seeing your girls point of view. As you would do anything for her. Made me smile.. 5 for sure. You have a way with songs. |