Monotonous Stab

by Tim   Jun 17, 2013


The monotonous stab, rips through veins.
No squeak, No moan, no yelp or groan. Silence.
Like coloring, but not inside the lines,
One single tear. Weeping out. Dot to dots bones.

Why does she cry? And why does she cut?
Voices in the mind. Not real. Are they there?
This all rings true. For many of you.
Lacking of help, I know darling. Why you fear.

Adventuring; Soul searing. Together we will.
Seeing through to the end. You are on the mend.
Let me guide you, or just to be there and such.
Listen. Your heartbeat calms - when we touch.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    I like the way it flows. Very smooth and nice. Great job.

    It works pretty well and I like the message. The idea of voices in someone's head and the need for self harm. It is a nice combination.

    Lovely write :)

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    Wow tim this poem is very unique. We all know we go through this. We all seek help. I love how the end of this poem is a twist. I love how the whole poem is dark and the very last line is calming and loving. Your mind has great ideas 5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Tim

      I'm glad you think so. I know my flow in this one is a little off, I'm not used to writing prose like this. But thought I'd give it a go today... I hope that it will come. - Thanks for the feedback. You inspire me to keep writing.

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