by ThebutterfliesMuse
Wow tim this poem is very unique. We all know we go through this. We all seek help. I love how the end of this poem is a twist. I love how the whole poem is dark and the very last line is calming and loving. Your mind has great ideas 5/5 |
by Tim
I'm glad you think so. I know my flow in this one is a little off, I'm not used to writing prose like this. But thought I'd give it a go today... I hope that it will come. - Thanks for the feedback. You inspire me to keep writing. |
by Kate
I like the way it flows. Very smooth and nice. Great job. |