Unique and Cold

by Amadeous   Jun 18, 2013


I'm an afflicted contradiction of my life depiction
The restriction is too much to handle, too much to bear
Beware, I'm unstable and unable to handle this despair

I thought I'd warn you before you came to know
that I'm not the person I was not so long ago

This heart is scared, impaired, and beyond simple repair
My eyes are glazed because I always seem to stare.

Leave me be
You cannot see

The way that I have suffered
I wear a blanket over my heart, my soul, I keep it covered.

You cannot know
No way to show

The sorrow that I hold
I am alone
And I'm so cold
It shivers to my bone

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  • 11 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    The flow is fantastic. The way you write is...amazing and it seems as though you take these emotions from the depth of your soul and just type it out. Keep writing. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    'I thought I'd warn you before you came to know
    that I'm not the person I was not so long ago'

    Fav part of this one you've done well

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Again, I love the beautiful song quality that this has. The rhyme is amazing and it flows so well. I like the emotion within it. Strong definitely and I like the delicate way you paint yourself. As broken and fragile and hiding from the world. Great characterization

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    This is... I don't even know. I really love this one, I can relate so easily. The emotion that you put into this piece is very noticeable and very heart wrenching in my opinion.

    The idea of shielding yourself off because you're afraid to show what is inside you, the broken pieces, the blanketed heart etc. The way it is worded is lovely.

    I am taken aback once again. Nicely done.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Beautifu , i love how you write, so much emotion and outstanding of the heart's feeling, I love how you speak to the writers feelings, bravo!!

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