Beautifu , i love how you write, so much emotion and outstanding of the heart's feeling, I love how you speak to the writers feelings, bravo!!

This is... I don't even know. I really love this one, I can relate so easily. The emotion that you put into this piece is very noticeable and very heart wrenching in my opinion.

The idea of shielding yourself off because you're afraid to show what is inside you, the broken pieces, the blanketed heart etc. The way it is worded is lovely.

I am taken aback once again. Nicely done.

Again, I love the beautiful song quality that this has. The rhyme is amazing and it flows so well. I like the emotion within it. Strong definitely and I like the delicate way you paint yourself. As broken and fragile and hiding from the world. Great characterization

'I thought I'd warn you before you came to know
that I'm not the person I was not so long ago'

Fav part of this one you've done well

The flow is fantastic. The way you write is...amazing and it seems as though you take these emotions from the depth of your soul and just type it out. Keep writing. 5/5