The Reborn; Phoenix

by Tim   Jun 18, 2013


Twisted dreams. Compartmental-ism.
It's always the same; Good vs Evil.
Day one: Fine. Day two: Less Divine.
Please! I beg, let me escape; Upheaval.

Distorted thoughts, where I find bliss.
Is all this real? Maybe just somewhat?
In the distance. Light. Within the night.
Kneeling down in prayer. I am begot.

Raised from the ashes, of the past.
Like phoenix. Another chance; given.
Re-born, Re-made. Yet now unadorn.
For happiness, I am forever driven.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Alanis

    Love it, it represents you in the most unusual way, my only critique is that one or 2 of the words are used out of context and may need to be replaced with more appropriate words, but other than that, a wonderfully unusual poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by OKUNOLA KAYODE

    On P O I N T!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, I think this is one of my favorite poems of yours, so powerful and has so much lines that stick to a person, outstanding poem, bravo!!! Two thumbs up

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    I actually really like this poem Tim. It has a very deep message within. Sometimes we all struggle within. And we all can be reborn. We all struggle with bad or good. I loved the first stanza because it is the message of it and the ending is perfect because it says we all can be reborn 5/5

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