I just love the way you write Meme. And especially such poems. I really don't know how much of imagination you carry to pen such pieces with a new skin, over and over again.

Lovely and amazing.

Keep writing:)

That's a lovely poem, with a new style from you. or let's say a new approach.. I like the narration. Great!

I have to say you do have a certain style Meme... I don't read your poetry too often but you keep this fantastic style that reminds me of timeless poetry, or poetry in a little book collection. It just seems lyrical to me I guess! :]

The way you write flows and is quite melodious. I love how you tell the story of these two lovers, the journey of her accepting imprisonment because she so believed in him.....then the ending, which makes me believe he jeopardized the truth of the real love he had with her. Maybe he was afraid to face it and reality at the same time as he couldn't own up to his mistakes.

Intriguing tale you weave!