A Date With Nature

by Tim & ThebutterfliesMuse   Jun 19, 2013


It's so easy to forget about culture.
With busy lives; and all the bus rides.
You can't see the forest for the trees.
Natural, Native, Nurturing Nature.

Nature ails my heart,
From the world we live in.
So much hatred inside us all
I want to live in peace.

Watching the clouds pass by,
Trees sway from side to side.
Forgetting about all the drama,
We are now one, me and nature.

Our souls seem to intertwine
And we both feel gratis.
Lets ride on a birds august wings
to our new home of repose.

But then comes, back the dread,
Only a little more, resting head.
My date with nature is now ending,
As our time is now transcending.

So please let us remember our culture.
To stop for a moment in our busy lives.
Marvel at the forest as well as the trees.
Natural, Native, Nurturing Nature.

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  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Beautiful poem! You two write wonderfully together!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, this is so beautiful fantastic poem, I love every part of it, I really do, it set my soul at peace reading this, outstanding job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Just one slight spelling error. It says "tress" and I think you mean "trees". :p lol that's all.

    Kate

    • 11 years ago

      by Tim

      Dam! I corrected that as well. Must have forgot to save it once I'd edited it. - ha ha. I will go back and change it now lol.

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    I am glad I could write this with you. We did great and in the future I hope we can write more !!

    • 11 years ago

      by Tim

      It was a pleasure to write with you. This is actually my first collab actually, I really enjoyed it. Just hope everyone else likes it. ha ha.

      And I'm sure we will write together again soon. :)

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