Karla, this piece really took me to a different place, I had this image of two people, both battling demons, him feeling like she is his world and fighting his own battles and trying to help her with her own, and her, in a dark place, struggling to find a way out without suicide becoming an option, and how his world would come crashing down if he didn't have her...
the imagery in this was really moving, and the tone of the whole piece, while not overly dark, heavy with heart and emotion.

I think it flowed fairly smoothly throughout and was well penned.

Only minor error is in the title, I believe it should be "disobedient" not "desobedient"

Great write, that I really enjoyed.
xx

This is such a magnificent piece, Karla.
I can't find the right words to express my amazement.

:'D Write On.

The disobedient ear..'heart' i guess..
heartfelt write..my fren