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  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    WOW MA.
    What a neat idea, you can write from the simplest prompts, how do you do it?
    I want to comment properly but neither do I have the words or capability, which is not right for you asked to have words thrown at you Lol.

    It's only 7am and I've just got up half hour ago and am halfway through dressing...haha, so forgive me for this rushed comment. I'll be back later though. For sure

    just had to comment :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Poet on the Piano

      Haha, gotcha & thank you just for reading it :] Have a good morning!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I'm back with a better and more operative comment.

    Even though you found a prompt and created something unique from it, you still had that MaryAnne touch to each stanza, there was a gentle urgency in the words, and it gave me the impression of asking someone to tell you how they feel about you, whether it be a new spouse, or a friend, or even yourself, you just want to be told the truth.

    I love the use of spring, and thunder, that's beautiful, and contrasting with calmness and the rush and urgency in the piece, adding to the loudness of thunder.

    I love how simple the title is as well, that one word, it can mean so much, drawing back on the new spouse, to begin to show feelings, or open up, to begin to speak truthfully...or just the beginning of a conversation.

    I really enjoyed this write :)