Comments : I dont understand

  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    So sad but written well

    You shouldn't have to change just be yourself

  • 11 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I loved how you connected with the reader by asking questions, that was nice. This is a sad piece but i liked how you want to resolve the differences you have with this person, how you just want to make it ok again..i enjoyed reading this though i would encourage you to polish up by doing some editing here and there esp on the punctuation