This is high poetry, my friend!! masterful and sophisticated. well played sir, well played.

Timothy, How I wish I could write a comment saying how much I understood the poem. Sadly, I can't, but I feel the emotion coming from the poem and even when I don't make sense of what I am reading, I still enjoy it because there is something that just pops out and says: "read me again, you won't get tired of reading me" ... and that's the voice this poem has, it's a strong piece.

Not only is this interesting but it also holds something deep which the writer feels and for the reader to deeply think about..an excellent write.

This is such a strong poem. I had to reread it a few times to really grasp what was going on! I love it