Lovely. I really have no words to describe the beauty of this piece. Every word bursts out an imagery so enticing and overwhelming. I really missed your writes Sis. This is absolutely beautiful.

Keep writing more:))

<3

This is a outstanding poem with such great flow and romantic imagery I am speechless
I would like to see on the front page here

beautifully done

You are a genius with your metaphors. I honestly was shocked and amazed by this piece. You managed to confuse me with where this piece was going until I reached the final line!

Brilliant Yakori, just brilliant :)

Together we entwine inadvertently
making love in waves, inducing a moan
you'll aways remain my aphrodisiac, lindt chocolate.

you every word is passionate. and gives a unique romance type.. these words together made a complete amazing poem.. the flow was good. and the choose of your words was excellent. i sometime surprised and wonder how you make these words so perfectly.

Together we entwine inadvertently
making love in waves, inducing a moan
you'll aways remain my aphrodisiac, lindt chocolate.

the ending few lines touches my heart softly and it beats and want to beats forever. its really good and inspiring poem for me.
i was so busy in reading and the poem is end. i wish you could write some more words. but after all its very good and meaningful for any love ones. good work my friend

Haha, wow..this is amazing, i have tried reading lots and lots of dictionaries to get to your lever of word play but you are on another lever. Just so brilliant.

Beautiful...really is....