by yogi73 Jun 21, 2013
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
We should be the wind, |
by Meena Krish
Its like Ying and Yang, there isn't one without another, a match made to balance nature. I like the meaning in this write and the way you have expressed it...excellent! |
by Timothy
The writer here clearly has a way with words; each line has an overt and direct effect upon the reader, sweet and sharp in their approach. The pastoral imagery of "wind", "coast" and "storm" are too indicative of the universal beauty that are indicated by the title; I guess, in this respect, the writer encompasses 'everything' natural in order to achieve a sense of complete involvement and so 'universal beauty'. |
You weave a journey in this piece and also a sense of desire to grab onto life and not waste a second of it. |