MA. I am always at a loss for words at how you can write these really amazing pieces so early in the morning, but I see the addition to the fact that you are awake in them...such as here, talking about daylight...

There is such gentleness in this piece though, it's almost like this piece was written with calmness, like the thoughts were not hurried with the moment, you know. Yet there was a little defeated feeling, in this, like you spend so long dreaming but never actually fulfil dreams.

I really loved this piece...as always, you write beautifully and this is no exception
xx

Um so this is amazing! There is so much depth here that I am just lost, but in a good way! My brain doesn't have the capacity right now to leave a beautifully detailed and eloquent comment so all I will say is...WOW.