by Tim Jun 21, 2013
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
Malevolent thoughts. Of my jaded life. |
by Bayan
More than amazing |
by Maher
I like how this started out dark and devoid of hope, and then moved on to shed light on why it's so dark. The end sounds a little more positive, even though it's just a positive memory that it speaks of. |
by Tim
No need to apologise - the longass comment is much appreciated :) thank you |
by WintersAngel
Beautiful :) |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
This is pretty good. I can imagine this as a lullaby. Or song lyrics. :). Beautiful written. Mate. 5/5 |
Wow this is so beautiful!!! 100/100, never stop writing, you are so fabulous at this wonderful poem, you never disappoint!! |
by Tim
Aww thank you Cathy. You're amazing! |