Wow this is so beautiful!!! 100/100, never stop writing, you are so fabulous at this wonderful poem, you never disappoint!!

This is pretty good. I can imagine this as a lullaby. Or song lyrics. :). Beautiful written. Mate. 5/5

Beautiful :)

I like how this started out dark and devoid of hope, and then moved on to shed light on why it's so dark. The end sounds a little more positive, even though it's just a positive memory that it speaks of.

It almost sounds like the person you speak of was tailored by your mind to save you from the abyss of darkness that you're in - like a mechanism put in place by your subconscious to prevent any rash life threatening ideas. I say that because it sounds movie-like - in a world of injustice and darkness, there's a light that has always been with us in our minds that most of us switch off (the person being that light that is keeping you from falling any further). I know it's about an actual person, but I love that it can also (in my very limited mind at least) be interpreted in such a way. That, my friend, is one of the beauties of poetry and imagination, and you have pointed that out nicely in this one :)

Sorry for the longass comment!

More than amazing
loved it