Desperate Reflection (book spine poetry)

This is a great sad write. I love all of your poems I have read so far!

The words and lines flow so well together. When you look in the mirror we judge ourselves for who we see and its sad. We feel depressed and all the decribing words you used are perfect. When we feel lonely we do feel like we are forgotten. Its like a ghost or a shadow. Its hard to love ourselves so thats why I love the last line. Girl in the mirror.... will you love me? That holds so much emotion and sadness. I can see this girl tears falling from the past memories trying to forge a smile but failing. Cuts on her body. Trying to get anyone to love her. But its bad. Thats why she wants to love herself but its hard with a past like this one. I love it ! 5/5

I think this can be relatable to a lot of different situations, girls, etc. We all have times when we feel broken, damaged, unloved... and most importantly we forget to love ourselves... we never approve of ourselves, we always pick apart every flaw we have until it eats us alive. That's what I got from this... the pain just picking at her self-esteem.

Once again, another great book spine poem! <3

Awww this is so sad and it really spoke out to me, wonderful poem, I think it will touch the hearts of many, two thumbs up, excellent poem!!!