Breaking me

by SimIsSeiko   Jun 21, 2013


Whatever this feeling
That's breaking me,
I'm finding it hard to bear

Whatever the word
That is harassing me,
I'm finding it hard to care

I've lost the feeling in my legs,
And love is gone from my heart
I've cried up all my tears tonight
And ripped my mind apart

It's like I'm in a pale cocoon
Sleeping inside, simply waiting
To evolve, and become a better
More beautiful me.
Lost in a sea of tranquility
Forgetting what it's like to be loved.

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  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    I really like your style of writing. It's unique. Your words are beautiful and flow together really well. Great write.

    • 11 years ago

      by SimIsSeiko

      AngelOfDeath,
      thanks i'm really glad you like it!

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    You are a good writer and put a lot of emotion into your poems. I hope you write more. Now the end was excellent because of the butterfly metaphor. :) we are all beautiful in our own ways though but its sad that people dont see it that way. I love your writing though 5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by SimIsSeiko

      JamesTheShadow
      thank you again for the high rating, i have two diffrent views on the changing into a butterfly, i think its amazing that catapillers can change into something so amazing, but i also find it sad that they have to change to be noticed. and most people are so blind, they never see anything except themselfs.

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