Comments : Breaking me

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    You are a good writer and put a lot of emotion into your poems. I hope you write more. Now the end was excellent because of the butterfly metaphor. :) we are all beautiful in our own ways though but its sad that people dont see it that way. I love your writing though 5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by SimIsSeiko

      JamesTheShadow
      thank you again for the high rating, i have two diffrent views on the changing into a butterfly, i think its amazing that catapillers can change into something so amazing, but i also find it sad that they have to change to be noticed. and most people are so blind, they never see anything except themselfs.

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    I really like your style of writing. It's unique. Your words are beautiful and flow together really well. Great write.

    • 11 years ago

      by SimIsSeiko

      AngelOfDeath,
      thanks i'm really glad you like it!