Comments : In Secret Hours.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You certainly took me somewhere else with this piece MaryAnne, and I love the dreaminess of this, so many times we ponder and think about who we may come to love in the future, and who we would want to love, the kind of person we'd want to love us and spend time with...

    I also love the wording here, it felt very sensual but still dreamy and gentle, like one of those dreams you'd like to get lost in completely, you know...

    I love the nature tones and the representation of forests but you not being a permanent trunk there, how this dream passes, I think is what that meant to represent...that you don't stay there long enough.

    Really beautiful write, as always.
    xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    Mary Anne! Loved this piece of love poem. You truly took me on a journey into the creative mind of the poet behind this piece.

    Each sentence resounded brilliance and elegance, something i enjoyed immersing myself in. There's not a line in this poem which i did not fall in love with. So thank you for bringing such pure joy to me with a poem like this.

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is amazing. It is so dreamy and lovely! I love the title so much, it makes me think of nights and darkness that often are very comforting. Sometimes I feel like this is the perfect time to think & dream of course! You just have the most lovely images. Loved referring to a scent. All scents do have that bit of mystery to them. They are all so different esp perfumes & such.Just a beautiful poem.. I could say so much about this poem, wish I could nominate it!