Comments : I havn't spent much time there.

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    Your emotions are so sad. I love the downfall of the poem leading up the the end. I love the story feel of it. Please keep writing
    5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by chloe

      Thank you so much and I have happier poems , I'm just not sure of posting them because they seem too obnoxious.