Comments : The edge

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    I love this poem and your poems in general because you always start out sad then admit a lil light then bamthe last line is a killer. Your endings are written so well. I love how you decribed the feeling. Love does exist but its hard to feel it at times.

    • 11 years ago

      by SimIsSeiko

      Thank you james, the best poems i've ever written are when i am sad, but with a little hope