by chloe Jun 23, 2013
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Hush hush squeal the train comes down the track, |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
This is an interesting poem. I love thr imagery of it as rvery line tells a story. The rhyming is good. The only spelling mistake is "veiw" should be " view". 5/5 |