This poem is much better. I love this one a lot. The rhyming and flow are flawless. I hope you keep writing as you have a gift 5/5

This is an excellent poem on this topic and in my experience if the friend is unwilling to move forward you should give this poem to the friend. Time well tell who stood and who fell 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

A very sweet poem and I really hope your friend will like it when he/she reads it. Try talking to him/her. Time will heal all the misunderstandings.

Keep writing more!

Great Poem:)

The ending was very straight forward, I like it.
Time will tell if the friendship is meant to be.

I liked the flow of this poem. It was simple but had a story that a lot of people can relate too. Great write!!

I liked the flow of this poem. It was simple but had a story that a lot of people can relate too. Great write!!