Comments : What does she know

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Way too many people understand this. Way too many people live like this, and they seem to Have a waybof finding each other but not help or happiness.

    Anyway good job with flow and theme, though the piece seems a bit lost, missing something mlike a kick.

    • 11 years ago

      by fireflylights13

      Thanks I know what you mean. This poem was not meant to be all that great just something I felt like writing.