Comments : Just one

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Lovely inspiration here! I like your repetition of "one" to emphasis the reality that it's in the little things we do and witness around us that can lift our spirits up. I love the journey of this piece, there were many life perspectives and I found myself nodding my head to many of them, I'm definitely a believer of one life making a difference...even though it may not be instant or be a major change, over time the truth can be known and shared and sometimes that in itself is the sweetest revelation.

    Beautiful and simple, it is up to us, and I feel like we all need this reminder once in a while not to get discouraged. To not take for granted the small reasons we live or the actions we take, everything adds up.

    Keep writing!