Comments : Words

  • 11 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    This poem is very yrie. It hurts when words are untrue. People always judge you by what yhey hear and dont get t know thr real person 5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by SimIsSeiko

      Thanks james, words can be such cruel things

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Words really can destroy and you expressed that well in this poem. I believe words also have the opposite effect and can take action in a positive way.... but they can definitely hurt in ways people would never notice. There needs to be care for them. Definitely felt that sadness when you wrote it would be better to live in silence. Sometimes there aren't words for certain things, and it's better to just truly learn how to understand someone by being with them. Sometimes words are spoken without any thought or concern, and that's horrible it has to happen. It's even harder to forget when something's been said but life does go on and I hope whoever hurt you stops, or realizes the impact.

    My only suggestion in this poem is to look out for a few spelling errors you had in your piece.

    Otherwise, take care and keep writing!

    • 11 years ago

      by SimIsSeiko

      Thanks for your help, i will admit, spelling is not my forte, when i was writing this piece i'll admit i was focusing on the bad aspect of every word, except at the end, when i ask the question forgetting how to cry for help?