You've started to write the most beautiful little writes, I've seen a little dreamy feel beginning to blossom in your poems as of late. I love it. This makes me think of how much music soothes our mind, kind of like how rain can have such a soothing feeling and make you feel so relaxed. I love the idea of composing a song together, that was a nice little added touch. Another lovely piece :)

Oh how beautiful this piece is! I love the tone here...I've just woke up so this isn't gonna be a long comment but I just found this to be so gentle, and calming almost, like a daydreamy kind of write.

Love the use of "drizzle" and I just adore "punctures of a heart", such a sad yet beautiful image and just takes this in a different direction.

Rain comes in different ways, there is that drizzly not even worth raining kind of rain, then the short but heavy showers and then the persistant overwhelming rain that causes floods and such forth, how you penned that is just so awesome

I love this piece for so many reasons, it's such a gentle beautiful write with so much going on but in a way that flows over not controls or overwhelms

Amazing as always MA
Xxx