I like the story here....I can almost see someone truly drowning....and the girl helplesss to stop it...But I see a much deeper meaning here...
I see the waves drowning someone as a metaphor for someone changing, and their unwillingness to stop it. As the one who loved him is sad about the distance that it causes...
orrrr....a metaphor for distance coming betwen two people because of a circumstance, and now what once was between them is now silent..
This could be describing so much I like how it keeps me guessing...
Love your writing girl!! I tell you these story poems are my favorite!