Wow I love the way you put this insanely amazing!!!

I like the rhyme in parts but maybe you should break it up different so it isn't just a paragraph. It might flow a little better.

Its ok but I agree with kate break it down different or write more to it. The rhyming was good but the flow just seemed off.

Its ok but I agree with kate break it down different or write more to it. The rhyming was good but the flow just seemed off.

Amazing 5/5 :)