by Dakota Jun 26, 2013
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Spilt blood all over. Not wasted but with purpose. Cuts to ease the pain, spilt blood all over... |
by Jessica
I can relate :(. 5/5 |
Sorry, double post. |
Short but had a lot to say, meaningful in every line |
I actually see this more as a quote, I mean I love brevity in poetry and definitely don't believe there's a minimum or maximum amount of lines a poem should have... I just wanted more elaboration, more of your voice or even the character involved in this. The line that did strike me was this: "not wasted but with purpose".....there was such a final feel to that, like as if that is the only resolution, this self harm, and it's heartbreaking. |