by Dakota Jun 26, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Sorrow pours down in a flood. |
Sounds like a deep depression. Youre pretty good. You stayed on the same subject and I could tell the pain behind it. Youre good, dont stop because you got alot of patential. |
by Kate
I like it. There is a lot of subtle pain etched into the words. Really captures you. |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
I like this poem because it makes the reader yhink what happened that December :). Its short and simple but so many words are said :). Great write |
by Dakota
Thank you |
I really like this. The emotion and the underlying pain in the words really create, well, sorrow. I like how it is written, different but very nice. Well done. |
by Dakota
Thanks |
This was a neat write and I liked how you weren't constricted to stanzas or anything, this felt more raw, like you just spilled your thoughts out.... |