Comments : Spider and veins

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This was a very unique piece! I liked how abstract it sounded, and automatically I pictured something being woven together, whether it was frayed or just not composed well before. I saw it metaphorically too and that last line was neat how you wrote "binds the heart forever" - that could mean maybe this person has become whole again because of the threads/intervention of another person in their life.

    Short but interesting poem. Keep writing!