One flaw in the second stanza first line spek should be speaks. I see no other flaws but wow can I say this poem is great!!.

The rhyming is great and the voice is very sad yet hypnotic. I loved how you put the voice as a person as it speaks to you. Very clever there. This poem flows so well as it tells a story from one line to the next. Wrapping it up at the end as it should. The voice destroying its victim. Great write 5