Dreams

by chloe   Jun 26, 2013


Started at nothing ,
And found myself here,
Gave lots of time,
Conquered some fears,
Still got a long way,
I need to go,
I hope that I'll make it,
But I really don't know,
But i love what I'm doing,
Im hopeful it would seem,
Keep'n my head in reality,
but not forgetting the dream.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Simple and brief write without a lot of detail but you have a very positive outlook on life, and look you have to keep moving forward without forgetting to fulfill your dreams.

    There were a few lines where I thought the flow was broken up and you could either get rid of a few of the commas and separate into stanzas...also I think you could use more periods when needed instead of repeating "but". Just a suggestion though :]

    Keep writing!

    • 10 years ago

      by chloe

      Thank you and I appreciate the advise(:

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Really nice poem. Short but still very nice. I liked the use of simple words and phrases.

    • 11 years ago

      by chloe

      Thanks!

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Wow. Another great piece, I really love your writing techniques.

    • 11 years ago

      by chloe

      Wow thank you so much! it means alot, especially because I love your poems so much!

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