Wow, as I g0t caught on my attention to your titles Saffie, i thought it were a lovestory between the two lovers, but it came to be more than a lovers, it's a mother's love, it's really good to know that our mother is always on our side whatever it is, to keep us bright when days won't let us shine...very inspiring!

There is nothing like a Mother's Love... you are lucky to have each other, treasure every moment... this is a precious and beautiful dedication to your mum.

You have a beautiful heart Saffie

A great dedication.
It also shows how important it is to be a good mum.

It is her influence that moulds and shapes your values. I think line 1 stanza 2 makes that point very well.

from this it is clear you have a great mum.

nice read.

First stanza: I absolutely love your opening, the metaphor of the seed is wonderful...because you began as a seed in her womb, and you grew and flourished...and you bond and feel love during that time in the womb with your mother and when you are born, it only grows stronger as the years pass by.

Second stanza: Exactly what great mother's do. Teach, restore and give courage. They are there to teach you multiple things, to dry your tears when in need and to give you the courage to stand up strong and fight back when life knocks you down.

Third stanza: Your smile is stronger than your tears ever will be because of the support you have of your Mom. That's truly wonderful, Saffie. <3

Ending: Lovely ending, another wonderful tribute to her. Love is priceless and when you have that special bond with your mother... no one can take that away.

Oooh wow the emotions in this poem are powerful. There is nothing like a mothers love.
Really great poem Saffie:)