Tintinnabulation (Reversed Nonet)

by Meme   Jun 27, 2013


As
the big
city danced
to the beats of
the Peace Festival,
Red Square echoed in lulls
of silence. Standing there I
was deafened by the cathedrals
in my heart -you were one step away!

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© Copyright 2013 by: gIrL
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**For a club contest**

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  • 11 years ago

    by Hellon

    This is a lovely write. I'm glad you put it in this form as it somehow enhances you word choice. You have some really pretty images painted within your words and I thoroughly enjoyed the whole verse. Nicely done!

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks Hellon :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I loved this piece, you took the prompt and researched it, and came up with a piece that reflected the place and time, it really was vivid, and I could hear the music in this piece...
    I loved that you used form, and I love the title...so creative to use...the sound of a bell after it has rung...

    Loved this piece Meme xx

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks a lot Tara :)

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