Comments : Heaven

  • 11 years ago

    by Chae

    Beautiful

    • 11 years ago

      by Sherwin Talapian

      Aw... thanks that's what i wanted to but i don't think i can have this one who make me feel like this they always come and easily go hays... but anyways thanks for your comment, and for stay as my friend :) the great chae :)

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    I love this piece so much. Your true feeling hide behind each word.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Dreams comming through is a important moment for us poets, love your poem