by Mohan
I hope everything will better soon for you. |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
The first fpur lines are so full of imagery and flow so very well!!. I love the memories you recall. The feelins of love that you love and him. Its hard being away fromthe one you love. The sad mmemories will last too. When you feel as one with your love it will always feel like they are holding you !. Time will always heal. You are a good writer! ! Beautiful peice ! 5 |
by BlueJay
I enjoy the subtle rhyme here and the story you tell in such a wonderful way, so pure and full of heart. I love the emotion of every word and how amazing the flow is here. Stunning write |