I love how you put your heart into this one and you cantell you have wow. So sad and so many words to decribe how you feel. We all feel like we are not good enough for the other pperson we love and it does play in our head with words they said your first two stazas portray the beautifully. Its hard to see what is good about ourselves without the flaws taking over.

Its hard to break through ourz walls without letting people in and its hard to let ourselves feel vulnerable. Our mind wanders to the negative side when we are alone and in the dark. That is written so well in your lines the sense of loneliness even with the person you love in your heart.

I love your ending because it truly does tie up to what your poem is about that we cling to everything our love says and wondering why they love our flaws. Thanks for sharing it was wonderful to read. 5

Wow!! Awesomely good!!