A Sonnet this can Never Be- Pure Emotion

I'm so glad to see you writing again, dear. Everyone grieves differently, sometimes you just have to shut the world out and cope, and when you're ready, (and this is proof that you are) you will step back out and get some fresh air. <3

This is absolutely breathtaking and like you said, pure emotion. You wrote from the bottom of your heart and it shows... and my heart hurts for you because I've been down that road before.

<3

Her body may be gone, but her spirit lives on... she would never want you to stop writing... its good to read you again... this is a beautiful piece, filled with sadness, hope and love, it sends forth a powerful and inspiring message as well...

I want to leave a better comment than my normal ones, but I found myself losing words.
There is a huge amount of sadness in this poem.
Take care <3

Wow, you have such a strong heart Andrea that I know is full of love, and Mama Pike would be so proud to see this...I'm happy you're back writing too and I know this will reach people too, the emotion is beautiful, pure, and filled with remembrance....I know your struggle, but since I wasn't in your shoes, I can't imagine the pain and loss....time helps I think, but also knowing you will never forget her and she will be a part of your life. Like you said in your poem, sometimes you just have to write, no matter in what way, but having less restrictions will help move on. This was so sweet and shows the fighter you are for life and taking each breath at a time!!!

(last line I think "breath" should be breathe")

Beautiful <3

Awwww.... Loved it.... just loved it! Its been long that I read a poem of yours and this piece shows true sadness yet creativity to the core.

Keep writing:)