Wow, MaryAnne, OMG. This is a poem of sheer awesomeness and I love this.
I know that the band inspires you and there songs are powerful and touch you as do they I.

You penned something that flowed perfectly, there is not a off line in this piece.

I felt that this piece was describing a love that you've never felt but that you dream off constantly and how the things you don't have are what you need the most.

Beautiful words. The whole tone was soft yet sad but it was penned with such a dreamy tone.

Love this. Nominated ASAP.

:) xx

Wow, I love the descriptions in this poem and all the wonderful ways you went about those descriptions. I love the tone and voice in the piece as well as the over all style. Your flow is perfect, flawlessly silky and smooth. I really love the word choice and the simplicity of such an elegant piece. Fantastic write.

5/5

p.s. now I have to find that song

The 'what could have been' thought always seems to spark so much curiosity. Loved the dreamy feel, it almost seemed real as if you two were really together.

I need to move, and not stay
the day inside bricks.
^I really loved these lines! It's as thought you're saying you should move forward & stop thinking so much of what will never be. The relationship seems stagnant, hence the bricks. You feel as though it's not moving & neither are you so you need to move forward and stop living in the present. Often there is indeed so much time that can be wasted if you don't do anything about it .

Violins would tip a smile onto your lips
^Loved this also.. I feel as though the song you're inspired by must have violins in it, sounds lovely. I may have to check it out for myself.

Awesome write though, you wrote it perfectly.