by Daylight Lucidity Jun 30, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The stem droops, |
by Mona
You write in a very sophisticated manner! Beautiful work! (: keep on writing! Best of luck! |
by ThebutterfliesMuse
Wow sweetie. The is unbelievable but sad. I love the use of the flower and the person metaphor. You are both wilted and you both have a tragic end :(. The whole poem ties together well. 5 |