Bye Bye

by Amadeous   Jun 30, 2013


My emotions are dangling and hanging by a thread.
Your smile is strangling with so much left unsaid.

A breath inhaled and another breath out,
The ship has sailed, gone, with no specific route.

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  • 11 years ago

    by beautifullybroken

    Know how this feels, I have been tbhere before. I love this.

  • 11 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Good flow with the rhymes. There was a sad vagueness in this write that no matter what happened, that is in the past, there is no compromising or ways to fix/solve the relationship. It is behind you yet you are still left saying goodbye and don't know what life has ahead...

    beautifully expressed, indeed the part about so much being left unsaid can tear the heart up and cause a lot of sorrow that there are things left unfinished, that not every emotion and thought was put out there. There were constraints, you were both holding back.

    A lot of pain said in few lines, keep writing!

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