Summer (heiku)

by Ole Carsten   Jul 1, 2013


Searching love on line
Tanned by the hot summer sun,
Whisper summer love.

Syllables count 5-7-5
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  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Creative (3)
    love (1)
    searching (2)
    ***************,
    suntanned (2)
    by (1)
    the (1)
    hot(1)
    summer (2)
    sun, (1)
    *********************
    whisper summer love. (5)

    I don't use the counter. But for sure it must be off Ole.
    I am still counting
    6
    8
    5

  • 11 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    1st line Syllable Count 5
    2nd line Syllable Count 7
    3rd line Syllable Count 5

    I have used http://www.wordcalc.com/index.php

    doesn't it count right?

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    6
    8
    5
    :/

    easy fix.

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