I Bleed

by Broken   Jul 2, 2004


I've lost all feeling
I no longer smile
I take pride in nothing
Now I'm rather vile

They try to help
But they don't know
I want to be alone
I want them to go

I find them annoying
Asking stupid things
They know the answer:
I'm bleeding my feelings

I bleed in many ways
Through my broken heart
From my teary eyes
And by tearing skin apart

They only see the outside
Not the blackened hole
That has consumed my heart
And taken over my soul

They can't help me
And this is how I'll live
Until I get the comfort
Only he can give

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  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    this was very well-written

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    wow..i loves this...i envy you! such talent..i especially liek this verse:
    'They only see the outside
    Not the blackened hole
    That has consumed my heart
    And taken over my soul'
    so beautiful..and i can relate..highly <333
    -Mortalidaga
    xxx take care

  • 20 years ago

    by PrazeJESUS!!!

    Great poem. Will you check out some of mine? I wanna know if you like my newest one:

    The last Car Ride... By *Nikki D*

  • 20 years ago

    by Emma!!!

    wow this is a good poem keep it up